Week 5: Lamar

10/13/2021

Prompt:
Write the saddest story you can in under 50 words.

Word Count:
1-49 words

Submissions:
-Leave your response in the comments section. If you are interested in reading past submissions, you can find the stories there as well.

Expectations:
-Remember that you are writing for the King's Academy community. Please be respectful of that community.
-Respect the word count
-Your work should have a title--this is not part of your word count.
-Include your full name and word count at the end of your submission.
-Have fun with this challenge.

Deadline:
22:00 Tuesday, October 19th

Photo Source:
https://wallpaperaccess.com/sad-abstract

8 Comments

Yousef Allabadi

10/13/2021 10:23:57 am

Gamer's Life
“Hey hey he is right beside the palm tree to the right take out your … a …”
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Tala Hajjiri link

10/13/2021 10:38:21 am

Reality
44 words
Open the closet… Cramp yourself inside… Fast.. Stay Quiet!He's here!.... “You can't hide forever” he opens the closet “Dad! Please” bottle smash to my head, Kicking, Hitting.. Bruising…… “How was your weekend everyone?”the teacher asked, a tear going down my face “Great..”

mahmoudalhamed

10/13/2021 11:35:18 am

I watch the life drain out of my brother. I don’t know if I should be sad that I never got reconciliation, or if I should be happy that I never had to explain what happened

Faris Doughan

10/14/2021 06:59:06 am

-Misinterpretation-

Sbren Sbeve

Faris Doughan
2 Words

Yasmine Najjar

10/15/2021 07:56:30 am

-Can You Guess What I Am?-

My skin is paper-thin and falling off bone, caressed by blowflies attracted to the smell, buzzing mindlessly beside my ear. I am in a paradox of living death- I am hardly living, in decrepit camp, my broken home, can you guess what I am? I am a refugee.

Yasmine Najjar
48 Words

10/15/2021 11:10:44 am

Goodmorning
Why are you here?
Checking in
Do I know you?
Want to play cards?
Why yes, I think I used to play
Yes, you were good
Oh was I?
Definitely

I won again
You did. I should go
What’s your name?
Elizabeth
Will you come back soon?
Definitely mom.

Mar Pizarro

10/18/2021 09:16:35 am

The Moth and the Bug Zapper
a glimmer,
it grows;
into friends, warmth, love and----

Lamar Al-Hassan

10/20/2021 04:17:46 am

Well done everyone! Yasmine , you are the winner for this week. You have crafted a beautifully poetic flash fiction piece. I enjoyed the sensory and descriptive details that brought your writing to life. Great job!

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